The goofs are not visible but it is when you pause and look at it very closely. I think going to he lucas film field trip is going to be pretty neat and fun. The film is pretty cool too i think Star War is pretty nice and the movie got a good background story.
Did we pause? What is the story? This paragraph is not very informative. It doesn't tell me anything about the movie, the goofs, special effects or the story. I'm going to wait until you fix it to give you a grade.
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